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Axel: I'm Your Angel With A Shotgun(CRITIQUE ME)by ~KuemomoShousa

Digital Art / Drawings / Other

(About the gun: The gun is a one-man portable gatling gun. The "handle" closer to the barrel of the gun is a V-stand to perch the gun up on something. JSYK)

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Get out your guns, battles begun,
are you a saint, or a sinner?
If loves a fight, than I shall die,
with my heart on a trigger.

They say before you start a war,
you better know what you're fighting for.
Well baby, you are all that I adore,
if love is what you need, a soldier I will be.

I'm an angel with a shotgun,
fighting til' the wars won,
I don't care if heaven won't take me back.
I'll throw away my faith, babe, just to keep you safe.
Don't you know you're everything I have?
..and I, wanna live, not just survive, tonight.

Sometimes to win, you've got to sin,
don't mean I'm not a believer.
..and major Tom, will sing along.
Yeah, they still say I'm a dreamer.

They say before you start a war,
you better know what you're fighting for.
Well baby, you are all that I adore,
if love is what you need, a soldier I will be.

I'm an angel with a shotgun,
fighting til' the wars won,
I don't care if heaven won't take me back.
I'll throw away my faith, babe, just to keep you safe.
Don't you know you're everything I have?
..and I, wanna live, not just survive, tonight.

ooooohhhhhhhh, ooooooohhhhh whoa whoa oooh whoa

I'm an angel with a shotgun..
fighting til' the wars won..
I don't care if heaven won't take me back..

I'm an angel with a shotgun,
fighting til' the wars won,
I don't care if heaven won't take me back.
I'll throw away my faith, babe, just to keep you safe.
Don't you know you're everything I have?
(I'm an angel with a shotgun)
..and I, want to live, not just survive, tonight.
(Live, not just survive)

..and I'm gonna hide, hide, hide my wings tonight.

They say before you start a war,
you better know what you're fighting for.
Well baby, you are all that I adore,
if love is what you need, a soldier I will be.

Critique by ~girlgamer27 Nov 30, 2012, 9:40:33 PM

I love the porportion and the music notes that are behind the angel are very interresting as well. The whole thing is very defined. You can easily tell what is going on in the picture, although the music notes behind are a bit confusing to be honest. But the style is very interesting the whole thing seems to be a bit cartoony, i thought i would let you know. Also this is my first critique too. What else should i add? Well the thing really caught my eye enough to write a critique and try my best to write one.

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Critique by *Idellechi Nov 25, 2012, 11:44:58 AM

This is really beautiful, as are the rest of your gallery. Something I really love is the textures you use, the gun has several different patterns and the rest is smooth shading. The wings and hair are done nicely and the light source and wind is clear.

One thing I would have you work on is the fingers and eyes. The finders look like leaves rather than digits, and the eyes kindof have a blank stare, but perhaps its just the pupil being a close color to the bangs. But brilliant job nonetheless! I look forward to seeing more from you Kue!

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~girlgamer27 Nov 30, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

woah! I wish i could draw like that! And it really caught my attention because i was going through my messages and i couldn't stop thinking about this piece so i added it to my favorites. :3

~KuemomoShousa Nov 30, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

((Practice makes perfect.

And I'm glad you like it.))

~girlgamer27 Nov 30, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

Your welcome

*Idellechi Nov 25, 2012 Student General Artist

That gun is huge....

~Kanamichi-Kun Nov 24, 2012 Hobbyist Traditional Artist

Should i do a critique? Although I'm not good at it and it can be meanie uvu;

~KuemomoShousa Nov 24, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

Give it a shot~ I want to use this piece as my progress piece, so I want to know how to improve it~

~Kanamichi-Kun Nov 24, 2012 Hobbyist Traditional Artist

Alright, btw can you put the song's link on to the description? i want to hear it

~KuemomoShousa Nov 24, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

Sure~ Added it at the top~

~Kanamichi-Kun Nov 24, 2012 Hobbyist Traditional Artist

I like the song 'u'
and i have send you my critique uvu;

=Mishakiara Nov 24, 2012 Hobbyist Digital Artist

hmm
im not really one to critique, but anyways
your hands are a bit... pointy in this? at least the thumbs.
also i'm not sure if it's just me, but it might look just a bit better if you made the shirt and/or jacket thing longer? ;0

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