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Axel: I'm Your Angel With A Shotgun(CRITIQUE ME) by KuemomoShousa Axel: I'm Your Angel With A Shotgun(CRITIQUE ME) by KuemomoShousa
(About the gun: The gun is a one-man portable gatling gun. The "handle" closer to the barrel of the gun is a V-stand to perch the gun up on something. JSYK)

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Get out your guns, battles begun,
are you a saint, or a sinner?
If loves a fight, than I shall die,
with my heart on a trigger.

They say before you start a war,
you better know what you're fighting for.
Well baby, you are all that I adore,
if love is what you need, a soldier I will be.

I'm an angel with a shotgun,
fighting til' the wars won,
I don't care if heaven won't take me back.
I'll throw away my faith, babe, just to keep you safe.
Don't you know you're everything I have?
..and I, wanna live, not just survive, tonight.

Sometimes to win, you've got to sin,
don't mean I'm not a believer.
..and major Tom, will sing along.
Yeah, they still say I'm a dreamer.

They say before you start a war,
you better know what you're fighting for.
Well baby, you are all that I adore,
if love is what you need, a soldier I will be.

I'm an angel with a shotgun,
fighting til' the wars won,
I don't care if heaven won't take me back.
I'll throw away my faith, babe, just to keep you safe.
Don't you know you're everything I have?
..and I, wanna live, not just survive, tonight.

ooooohhhhhhhh, ooooooohhhhh whoa whoa oooh whoa

I'm an angel with a shotgun..
fighting til' the wars won..
I don't care if heaven won't take me back..

I'm an angel with a shotgun,
fighting til' the wars won,
I don't care if heaven won't take me back.
I'll throw away my faith, babe, just to keep you safe.
Don't you know you're everything I have?
(I'm an angel with a shotgun)
..and I, want to live, not just survive, tonight.
(Live, not just survive)

..and I'm gonna hide, hide, hide my wings tonight.

They say before you start a war,
you better know what you're fighting for.
Well baby, you are all that I adore,
if love is what you need, a soldier I will be.
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WARNING: THIS MAY BE HIGHLY OFFENSIVE TO ANYONE YOU READS IT FOR IT'S UN-AMAZINGNESS. First, GAWD, I CAN'T CRITIQUE, I'M WAY TOO NICE ABOUT IT. Plez, try to take it HARSHER than what it is! >.<

Okay, so I love this piece, I can so see this, and can definately see it connect to the song.

I don't see very many of these kinds of art pieces, and never so clear to the point. When I saw it, I knew, "Angel With A Shotgun", BANG! That's how clear it is.

I also admire your shading style. -_- You are so amazing at drawing guns, too. YOU SHOULD BE PUNISHED FOR BEING BETTER THAN ME. You are a great artist.

SEE, HORRIBLE CRITIQUING, I WISH YOU DIDN'T EVEN READ IT! >.< I AM TOOO NICE.
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Note: This is my first critique ever, so it might be not very well detailed & good. i'm not good at english, i hope you can understand to what i've said

Well, i think this drawing represent the song well, i like the wings that you drew there, but i think it should be more feather-ish, i find it was look stiff and just like mechanic wings.

I do like the long gun, but i think it's too long for his size, i doubt his arms can reach the second handle on the gun. You should've used a ruler to draw the gun's neck (and the second handle), i think it's better if it's straight, i think the gun's front (where the bullet goes out) you should draw it not curvy like that, it's better if it's more smooth (it's only my opinion though).

For the anatomy, it's good enough, good job.
but i find some cons on it, here are the list:
~The arms are too pointy.
~The eye was too big, you should've draw it smaller.
~His right hand that inside his clothes was not the same size as the one that outer the clothes.
~His jeans, the one on the crotch is not large enough, because i think his "thing" is not fit enough in it >u> (that's what i see)
~In my opinion, his front hair should be more spready, or is he used hairgel to make his hair like that? uvu
~Although i can't draw clothes, i think his clothes should be more "realistically", you know..... 'u'

For the colouring, i think it's good uvub , i don't really know of colourings, so yeah......

I don't really like the background, rather than music notes i think it would be better if he's flying in the sky, Idk ;A; (because i'm not good at adding backgrounds too u_u; )

For the rates that i give....... i have read the explanations for the each of it and that's what i think of the drawing
" FAQ #95: What is the Critique Feature and how do I use it? "


That's my Critique..................... i hope it's good enough to be understandable &A&
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trainiac12 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013
Possibly the best picture on the internet
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kmathel94 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist
WOW!
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girlgamer27 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
woah! I wish i could draw like that! And it really caught my attention because i was going through my messages and i couldn't stop thinking about this piece so i added it to my favorites. :3
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KuemomoShousa Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
((Practice makes perfect. =P And I'm glad you like it.))
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girlgamer27 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Your welcome :D
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Idellechi Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student General Artist
That gun is huge....
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Kanamichi-Kun Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Should i do a critique? Although I'm not good at it and it can be meanie uvu;
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KuemomoShousa Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Give it a shot~ I want to use this piece as my progress piece, so I want to know how to improve it~
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Kanamichi-Kun Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Alright, btw can you put the song's link on to the description? i want to hear it :)
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KuemomoShousa Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Sure~ Added it at the top~
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